I chose CSI- Las Vegas because I watched many episodes. My sister and my mother like it too. In general, the story it’s about a murder. It’s really fun to know how the scientist revolved murderer in Las Vegas.There are six principals ‘characters that they are all scientist. In first, Gil Grissom is the chief and he is a specialist in insects study.
Catherine Willows is a specialist in blood. She was a naked dancer before to be a scientist and she has a girl.
Warrick Brown is a specialist-analyst in audio and video. He is a gambler.
Nick Stokes is a specialist-analyst in fibre and hairy.
Sara Sidle is a specialist analyst in materials and Greg Sanders is the technician in laboratory.
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Hello Fabie, how are you? My name's Ángel, I'm 18 and I'm studying English in one of the most important universities in Colombia, at UIS. www.uis.edu.co
I want to be a teacher, and I love English!
Ok, I found some mistakes in your comment, but don't worry! They are very common mistakes, please pay attention.
First you said: In general, the story it’s about a murder, the correct form is: In general, the story is about a murder, because the story is the subject and "it" it's not necessary.
Second, there are some mistakes in this sentence, look! You said: It’s really fun to know how the scientist revolved murderer in Las Vegas. The correct form is: It’s really fun to know how the scientists resolve murders in Las Vegas.
Third, you said: There are six principals ‘characters that they are all scientist. This form is better: There are six principal characters, principal without s, because is the adjective, and all of them are scientists.
Fourth, you said: In first, you don't need to add IN.
And the last, in this sentence: Nick Stokes is a specialist-analyst in fibre and hairy. The correct form is Nick Stokes is a specialist-analyst in fibres and hairs.
Ok, they're all your mistakes, but don't worry! It's a good practice for you and me. I think, the program is excellent; I love it, and here in Colombia CSI is very popular. I like the style of the scientists to resolve their cases, it's very cool.
Ok, mi e-mail is angelthedarkangel@hotmail.com, please write to me! Glad to meet you!
Bye,
Ángel Mogollón
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